tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post4703308520523806255..comments2023-08-04T06:26:40.308-04:00Comments on Avalon Authors: Show Me EmotionSandy Codyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02824301408180614516noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-52610416315140973892010-10-19T10:44:10.474-04:002010-10-19T10:44:10.474-04:00A great lesson. I preach this to friends I write...A great lesson. I preach this to friends I write with but it's REALLY hard to remember when I'm writing my own novels.Jane Myers Perrinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06576216943496701867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-91253151757710501252010-10-17T23:44:43.469-04:002010-10-17T23:44:43.469-04:00I'll check out the first book you mention. It ...I'll check out the first book you mention. It will, I hope, keep my characters from always shrugging and swallowing those lumps in their throats. :-)Rebecca L. Boscheehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08532242944189083737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-13233882174146622752010-10-17T23:43:08.756-04:002010-10-17T23:43:08.756-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Rebecca L. Boscheehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08532242944189083737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-72786343039342564202010-10-12T14:46:10.980-04:002010-10-12T14:46:10.980-04:00I'm guilty of committing the infamous 'tel...I'm guilty of committing the infamous 'tell' in my drafts. Thanks to a great critique partner who gently reminds me to 'show' don't tell. Enjoyed the post. I'll certainly check into the book you suggested.<br /><br /><br />www.lorettacrogersbooks.comLoretta C. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13477553413309389196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-32023130036182440422010-10-11T10:46:09.622-04:002010-10-11T10:46:09.622-04:00Nice post. "Show, don't tell" is one...Nice post. "Show, don't tell" is one of those things we all need to be reminded of every now and then.Sandy Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02824301408180614516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-35969941526044666532010-10-11T10:46:02.087-04:002010-10-11T10:46:02.087-04:00Nice post. "Show, don't tell" is one...Nice post. "Show, don't tell" is one of those things we all need to be reminded of every now and then.Sandy Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02824301408180614516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-47059169865722577352010-10-11T09:44:29.789-04:002010-10-11T09:44:29.789-04:00Great books Laverne and a good reminder to look fo...Great books Laverne and a good reminder to look for those words and emotions in our wip.Sandra Leesmithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911169281960710923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6632249142954767681.post-14500537451113902782010-10-10T12:02:02.142-04:002010-10-10T12:02:02.142-04:00Hi Laverne,
These books sound great! I've ofte...Hi Laverne,<br />These books sound great! I've often wondered if my heroine is swallowing and sighing too much. Sounds like I need those books!Beate Boekerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16299015488989360031noreply@blogger.com